Dec 16, 2009

never knew



Who knew, it would be so easy to let go
So easy to just breathe...

Who knew it would be so near, a future
We created, but i survived to see...

Who knew if, were this power given
To live, survive and dance with glee,
I would choose to live, survive and dance
With or without thee

Who knew that when it ended
I would be able to see
A life full of glory,
And be a person, who was completely ME!

10 comments:

curry said...

Who knew that you would write something so deep, yet so light and convincing...

Sorcerer said...

hmm.... thought provoking..nice nice!

Ode Writer said...

@chicken curry: i didn't... even am surprised !! :O :P

@Sorcy: thx thx! :P

gkam said...

happy 100th post! :)

gkam said...

who knew a gal as crazy as me,
could do poetry...

wahh wahhhh!!! :P

Ode Writer said...

@Gkam [=))]: thanks for remembering... meri aankhon se aasu tapak rahein hain... [sniff]

stop being so nice in the comments section, dammit!!... drives me nuts :P :P :P

workhard said...

Who knew if, were this power given
To live, survive and dance with glee,
I would choose to live, survive and dance
With or without thee


Thats my fav part of the poem... Good work




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KParthasarathi said...

First visit.Liked the post

deeps said...

we never know..!!
life is like that .. :-P

commited to life said...

never knew.. letting go would be so easy...

liked a lot

p.s was just passing by