(My contribution for this week's Prompt and Link on "Identity")
It’s been a while….
Been a while since I thought of thee,
Your presence, your face, your identity
The way you would have reacted
To each of my daily antics!
Been a while I thought of thee
The reason u left me and flee
The day you chose to keep me here
Was that too tough on you, mother?
Now I call this place my home,
A place where people like me come,
Though all think of me as one,
I know Ma, I am no orphan
You may have loved me, given me birth
But of people there may be a dearth,
Who understood your love for me,
Not letting me have your identity
The thought of you being near
Has always given me comfort, in fear
It sometimes feels so lonely, here
Wish you would take me, sooner than ever
Then I would have a family,
People who would help me see
Amid this whole wide world of theirs,
My own little identity!
Been a while since I thought of thee,
Your presence, your face, your identity
The way you would have reacted
To each of my daily antics!
Been a while I thought of thee
The reason u left me and flee
The day you chose to keep me here
Was that too tough on you, mother?
Now I call this place my home,
A place where people like me come,
Though all think of me as one,
I know Ma, I am no orphan
You may have loved me, given me birth
But of people there may be a dearth,
Who understood your love for me,
Not letting me have your identity
The thought of you being near
Has always given me comfort, in fear
It sometimes feels so lonely, here
Wish you would take me, sooner than ever
Then I would have a family,
People who would help me see
Amid this whole wide world of theirs,
My own little identity!
36 comments:
No family; no identity. I hear what you're saying.
No family; no identity. I hear what you're saying.
No family; no identity. I hear what you're saying.
hi
Well written ..
i can forsee a writer in making ..
cheers
hi
Well written ..
i can forsee a writer in making ..
cheers
hi
Well written ..
i can forsee a writer in making ..
cheers
I bow to thee...
partly because ur the circus manager and partly coz I cant compose poetry to save my life...
but this is good....
I liked this part best:
Now I call this place my home,
A place where people like me come,
Though all think of me as one...
reminds me of what my life has become...
I see a peotess in the making. Like WOW! is what I can say, as beautiful as 'Travesty'.
Lotsa Luv
Poo
I see a peotess in the making. Like WOW! is what I can say, as beautiful as 'Travesty'.
Lotsa Luv
Poo
I see a peotess in the making. Like WOW! is what I can say, as beautiful as 'Travesty'.
Lotsa Luv
Poo
I bow to thee...
partly because ur the circus manager and partly coz I cant compose poetry to save my life...
but this is good....
I liked this part best:
Now I call this place my home,
A place where people like me come,
Though all think of me as one...
reminds me of what my life has become...
I bow to thee...
partly because ur the circus manager and partly coz I cant compose poetry to save my life...
but this is good....
I liked this part best:
Now I call this place my home,
A place where people like me come,
Though all think of me as one...
reminds me of what my life has become...
That was seriously interesting,
you talked about your own identity, talked about your mom and your family and overall, your house...
Then I would have a family,
People who would help me see
Amid this whole wide world of theirs,
My own little identity!
awsome!!
That was seriously interesting,
you talked about your own identity, talked about your mom and your family and overall, your house...
Then I would have a family,
People who would help me see
Amid this whole wide world of theirs,
My own little identity!
awsome!!
That was seriously interesting,
you talked about your own identity, talked about your mom and your family and overall, your house...
Then I would have a family,
People who would help me see
Amid this whole wide world of theirs,
My own little identity!
awsome!!
Keep writing..
dog and (wo)man
Keep writing..
dog and (wo)man
Keep writing..
dog and (wo)man
glad to see such good values in you..family in many a ways forms our identity
glad to see such good values in you..family in many a ways forms our identity
glad to see such good values in you..family in many a ways forms our identity
Girl u seriously rock..!!
Sum cool post this one this:D
I thought sum of ur best writings were Travesty and Flight..but u seem to continually better urself..Way to Go!!
Girl u seriously rock..!!
Sum cool post this one this:D
I thought sum of ur best writings were Travesty and Flight..but u seem to continually better urself..Way to Go!!
Girl u seriously rock..!!
Sum cool post this one this:D
I thought sum of ur best writings were Travesty and Flight..but u seem to continually better urself..Way to Go!!
lot of pain.... not a good sign... but wat d hell your blog touches part of life... liked the last four lines a lot... something unsaid expressed so beautifully... keep up the good work...
Riddhi
lot of pain.... not a good sign... but wat d hell your blog touches part of life... liked the last four lines a lot... something unsaid expressed so beautifully... keep up the good work...
Riddhi
lot of pain.... not a good sign... but wat d hell your blog touches part of life... liked the last four lines a lot... something unsaid expressed so beautifully... keep up the good work...
Riddhi
@ all... thx a lot for the appreciation!! :)
@ all... thx a lot for the appreciation!! :)
@ all... thx a lot for the appreciation!! :)
Beautiful one :)
Beautiful one :)
Beautiful one :)
Hey this is was really cool, nice writing :)
Hey this is was really cool, nice writing :)
Hey this is was really cool, nice writing :)
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