Sitting quietly, I shed a tear
No one near to hold and care
The one I loved the most
Is the one for whom I fear….
She was small, innocent and dear
Her guilt was her prayer
Which they didn’t hear
When they killed her…over and over
That’s my princess there
I thought she was so pretty and rare
But now I sit next to her
Laid like a showpiece none could care
Result of someone’s lust
Her life and my dreams now lay in dust
Put to rest, she must
But should some one have done…..
Something so outrageous
Would she get the justice she deserved…?
Would I get back to my life unreserved...?
Would it ever be the same again…?
None to hold, none to care…
Just coz someone took a dare…
To do something outrageous
No one near to hold and care
The one I loved the most
Is the one for whom I fear….
She was small, innocent and dear
Her guilt was her prayer
Which they didn’t hear
When they killed her…over and over
That’s my princess there
I thought she was so pretty and rare
But now I sit next to her
Laid like a showpiece none could care
Result of someone’s lust
Her life and my dreams now lay in dust
Put to rest, she must
But should some one have done…..
Something so outrageous
Would she get the justice she deserved…?
Would I get back to my life unreserved...?
Would it ever be the same again…?
None to hold, none to care…
Just coz someone took a dare…
To do something outrageous
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**Applause**
Thats all i cud cum up with:)
I am speechless!
**Applause**
Thats all i cud cum up with:)
I am speechless!
**Applause**
Thats all i cud cum up with:)
I am speechless!
We all possess dual personalities within us and thats true. Loved this one.. Its always pleasure getting into a character....Nice :)
We all possess dual personalities within us and thats true. Loved this one.. Its always pleasure getting into a character....Nice :)
We all possess dual personalities within us and thats true. Loved this one.. Its always pleasure getting into a character....Nice :)
Sometimes the ques tion "Why?" is much bigger than we realise.
A thoughtful post.
Gemma
Sometimes the ques tion "Why?" is much bigger than we realise.
A thoughtful post.
Gemma
Sometimes the ques tion "Why?" is much bigger than we realise.
A thoughtful post.
Gemma
very sad and poignant...
and nicely done too...
very sad and poignant...
and nicely done too...
very sad and poignant...
and nicely done too...
disturbing and sad, but nicely done.
disturbing and sad, but nicely done.
disturbing and sad, but nicely done.
very emotional nice job.
very emotional nice job.
very emotional nice job.
very well written...or poeted...if that is a word :P
it is a bit disturbing though...
very well written...or poeted...if that is a word :P
it is a bit disturbing though...
very well written...or poeted...if that is a word :P
it is a bit disturbing though...
@all above... thx for appreciating it :) Was wonderful to read the various ways in which each of u chose to interpret it!
@ TT... dude... shouldn't it be composed?? :O... and one would thinki ud know english atleast after visiting lala land :P
@all above... thx for appreciating it :) Was wonderful to read the various ways in which each of u chose to interpret it!
@ TT... dude... shouldn't it be composed?? :O... and one would thinki ud know english atleast after visiting lala land :P
@all above... thx for appreciating it :) Was wonderful to read the various ways in which each of u chose to interpret it!
@ TT... dude... shouldn't it be composed?? :O... and one would thinki ud know english atleast after visiting lala land :P
Outrageous indeed. . .. .
don't leave her in pain.. :)
make a sequence.. .
bring her back to the joyous life!! :)
Outrageous indeed. . .. .
don't leave her in pain.. :)
make a sequence.. .
bring her back to the joyous life!! :)
Outrageous indeed. . .. .
don't leave her in pain.. :)
make a sequence.. .
bring her back to the joyous life!! :)
bravo!! well done.. and a pertinent message as well!!!
bravo!! well done.. and a pertinent message as well!!!
bravo!! well done.. and a pertinent message as well!!!
Well written and very touching .
Like Gemma says the "why" which will for most remain unanswered is so heartbreaking. How can there be any pleasure at all in such a brutal action I completely fail to understand.
Well written and very touching .
Like Gemma says the "why" which will for most remain unanswered is so heartbreaking. How can there be any pleasure at all in such a brutal action I completely fail to understand.
thoughtful and moving!
thoughtful and moving!
thoughtful and moving!
good
good
good
Flows nicely and images are great. Well done my friend.
love-bd
Flows nicely and images are great. Well done my friend.
love-bd
Flows nicely and images are great. Well done my friend.
love-bd
hmm, the grief and pain has been well potrayed, but i am looking beyond the
fine print..and wondering whats going on in rachna's mind? :)
hmm, the grief and pain has been well potrayed, but i am looking beyond the
fine print..and wondering whats going on in rachna's mind? :)
hmm, the grief and pain has been well potrayed, but i am looking beyond the
fine print..and wondering whats going on in rachna's mind? :)
@all... thx for liking it... was attempting poetry after a long time... nd was unsure if i could carry it off...
@ Nikhil... shez gone forever dude... it aint a soap opera to get her back ;)
@ Devang... lolz... nuthings in my mind... it's all a part of what i find outrageous! thx for commenting... wonder what made u do it ;-) :P... kiddin!!
@all... thx for liking it... was attempting poetry after a long time... nd was unsure if i could carry it off...
@ Nikhil... shez gone forever dude... it aint a soap opera to get her back ;)
@ Devang... lolz... nuthings in my mind... it's all a part of what i find outrageous! thx for commenting... wonder what made u do it ;-) :P... kiddin!!
@all... thx for liking it... was attempting poetry after a long time... nd was unsure if i could carry it off...
@ Nikhil... shez gone forever dude... it aint a soap opera to get her back ;)
@ Devang... lolz... nuthings in my mind... it's all a part of what i find outrageous! thx for commenting... wonder what made u do it ;-) :P... kiddin!!
Very engaging and thought provoking.
Very engaging and thought provoking.
Very engaging and thought provoking.
some times a moment of outrageous can affect so many others..very well said
some times a moment of outrageous can affect so many others..very well said
some times a moment of outrageous can affect so many others..very well said
It shows the tradgey of an action played out without thought to reprecussions. Well done!
It shows the tradgey of an action played out without thought to reprecussions. Well done!
It shows the tradgey of an action played out without thought to reprecussions. Well done!
Nicely done!
Nicely done!
Nicely done!
sad...
but nicely put up...
sad...
but nicely put up...
sad...
but nicely put up...
A story of life, with so many questions unanswered. You've captured it well with words here.
A story of life, with so many questions unanswered. You've captured it well with words here.
A story of life, with so many questions unanswered. You've captured it well with words here.
I'm a fan of everybody who writes poems. That's an art, poem-writing.
Well written :)
I'm a fan of everybody who writes poems. That's an art, poem-writing.
Well written :)
I'm a fan of everybody who writes poems. That's an art, poem-writing.
Well written :)
very nicely composed...yet tragic n heart rending! Felt sad after reading it, therefore read ur earlier post to feel better.
-Poo
very nicely composed...yet tragic n heart rending! Felt sad after reading it, therefore read ur earlier post to feel better.
-Poo
very nicely composed...yet tragic n heart rending! Felt sad after reading it, therefore read ur earlier post to feel better.
-Poo
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