Apr 7, 2008

Lost Highway

(This is my contribution for prompt and link for lost highway)



It was a cloudy day…..



“Want to go for a walk around??” I asked. “Sure… I guess”... he said “Hmm… yea then…”



We stepped outside… the breeze, the trees, the smell of wet mud, and the two of us, together, yet apart… walking….silence





“Where is this road headed??... Never been here before, I guess” he said, giving me a very confused look.



“Strange… living here for so long, and we thought, we knew every road ahead of us!” I smiled.



“Just like life, I guess….” he nodded



“Hmmm…” I nodded back



We both shared a sheepish grin…. Followed by a silence only we understood.



Suddenly, I turned towards him….



“What if we ever lost each other, on the road of life?” I asked



The recent fights and arguments flashed before my eyes… making me, immediately regret the question.



“I would find my way to you…. And walk with you” he reassured with a big smile on his face…. You?



“I wouldn’t lose you in the first place”…
I whispered….clutching his hand in mine…. For the first time in days!



36 comments:

the_ego_has_landed said...

awww... this was so nice... so special, loved the last line so much!

I bet this isnt fiction ;)

p.s. what is this prompt link?

the_ego_has_landed said...

awww... this was so nice... so special, loved the last line so much!

I bet this isnt fiction ;)

p.s. what is this prompt link?

the_ego_has_landed said...

awww... this was so nice... so special, loved the last line so much!

I bet this isnt fiction ;)

p.s. what is this prompt link?

Ode Writer said...

Hey... thx :)

This link has topics for u to blog abt... use it when u don't have much to blog about, or just for kicks :P

AND... this is absolute fiction.. glad u liked it so much :D

Ode Writer said...

Hey... thx :)

This link has topics for u to blog abt... use it when u don't have much to blog about, or just for kicks :P

AND... this is absolute fiction.. glad u liked it so much :D

Ode Writer said...

Hey... thx :)

This link has topics for u to blog abt... use it when u don't have much to blog about, or just for kicks :P

AND... this is absolute fiction.. glad u liked it so much :D

sakship said...

well written!! beautiful transcript!! please continue......

sakship said...

well written!! beautiful transcript!! please continue......

sakship said...

well written!! beautiful transcript!! please continue......

Aareet said...

Fiction or not - it works!

Thanks for dropping by my blog.

Aareet said...

Fiction or not - it works!

Thanks for dropping by my blog.

Aareet said...

Fiction or not - it works!

Thanks for dropping by my blog.

PURN!MA said...

hmm... so phixshun hmm?? Interestin!

PURN!MA said...

hmm... so phixshun hmm?? Interestin!

PURN!MA said...

hmm... so phixshun hmm?? Interestin!

Nikhil said...

This is not FICTION!!
I bet my 100 bucks which is the only money I've right now!! >:P

Nikhil said...

This is not FICTION!!
I bet my 100 bucks which is the only money I've right now!! >:P

Nikhil said...

This is not FICTION!!
I bet my 100 bucks which is the only money I've right now!! >:P

d gypsy! said...

if thats nt fiction...i wud say-lucky u...

if that is it--lemme say...oh yea...that happens in fiction alone!!!!

d gypsy! said...

if thats nt fiction...i wud say-lucky u...

if that is it--lemme say...oh yea...that happens in fiction alone!!!!

d gypsy! said...

if thats nt fiction...i wud say-lucky u...

if that is it--lemme say...oh yea...that happens in fiction alone!!!!

Karina said...

Great piece this one! I really enjoyed it.

Karina said...

Great piece this one! I really enjoyed it.

Karina said...

Great piece this one! I really enjoyed it.

mithunkotian said...

aah...the conversation every couple has during the lovu phase...
:P
gud, gud, nice mood capturing and all...u've done too well infact...which makes me wonder...(evil grin)

mithunkotian said...

aah...the conversation every couple has during the lovu phase...
:P
gud, gud, nice mood capturing and all...u've done too well infact...which makes me wonder...(evil grin)

mithunkotian said...

aah...the conversation every couple has during the lovu phase...
:P
gud, gud, nice mood capturing and all...u've done too well infact...which makes me wonder...(evil grin)

Ode Writer said...

@ Saa and Aareet and Karina... thx for liking it :)

@ Poo... hmmmmmmm at u too :P

@ Nikhil... put tht 100 bucks to better use.... sms me :P

@ Sinner... totally agree with u... all this HAS to be fiction!!

@Mithun... don't even get there!!... thx for the compliment though!

AND @ ALL - THIS IS FICTION... BELIEVE IT OR KNOCK URSELF OUT!! :P

Ode Writer said...

@ Saa and Aareet and Karina... thx for liking it :)

@ Poo... hmmmmmmm at u too :P

@ Nikhil... put tht 100 bucks to better use.... sms me :P

@ Sinner... totally agree with u... all this HAS to be fiction!!

@Mithun... don't even get there!!... thx for the compliment though!

AND @ ALL - THIS IS FICTION... BELIEVE IT OR KNOCK URSELF OUT!! :P

Ode Writer said...

@ Saa and Aareet and Karina... thx for liking it :)

@ Poo... hmmmmmmm at u too :P

@ Nikhil... put tht 100 bucks to better use.... sms me :P

@ Sinner... totally agree with u... all this HAS to be fiction!!

@Mithun... don't even get there!!... thx for the compliment though!

AND @ ALL - THIS IS FICTION... BELIEVE IT OR KNOCK URSELF OUT!! :P

equilibrium said...

Beautiful.

Cheesy lines they are, I would have said sometime back. But then,they are cute.

equilibrium said...

Beautiful.

Cheesy lines they are, I would have said sometime back. But then,they are cute.

equilibrium said...

Beautiful.

Cheesy lines they are, I would have said sometime back. But then,they are cute.

Ode Writer said...

@ equi... thx :D

Ode Writer said...

@ equi... thx :D

Ode Writer said...

@ equi... thx :D