May 9, 2008

her fantastic love....

(This week's contribution to "Prompt and Link" - Fantasy)


She held him near... His presence was enough for her to be re-assured that all would be right again. That people would not be so rude and disgusted with her presence. She found herself drowning in sleep, in his arms. Afraid he would be hurt, she was about to let go of her embrace, when he smiled. A smile which she knew meant, that he wouldn’t let go of her, no matter what. The comfort of his arms made her even more comfortable. After all, it was a long and tiring day! First, she was made to speak about things and events, she knew were false, and then there were these people…. people who were trying to tell her, that her truth, the only thing she knew to be true, was actually false! She recollected how she felt angry from her guts, and how she had reacted by throwing the stick at them. And now she was, in the arms that meant heaven for her… the place where she found peace, in the arms of the only man, she had ever truly loved… she went to sleep!.......







.....................She opened the door to her mother’s room, to find her sleeping peacefully on the floor, with a worn out jacket, she immediately recognised. After the entire trauma, emotions and the action during the day, finding her mother at such peace, made her feel like a fool! It broke her heart thinking about her state, realising that no matter how much she wanted to let it prevail… she couldn’t allow her own mom to remain in this peace, in this fantasy world of hers, where the reality was obviously missing! She recognised the smile, mom had on her face at that moment, and she wished she could capture it! It was the same smile she would have, whenever she was with Dad… Dad…. The man, she, her mom and all had all lost two years ago!

24 comments:

mithunkotian said...

we all have a fantasy world of our own, a world which we shape, which we nurture within us...so that we can escape reality...
like ur circus world :P

mithunkotian said...

we all have a fantasy world of our own, a world which we shape, which we nurture within us...so that we can escape reality...
like ur circus world :P

mithunkotian said...

we all have a fantasy world of our own, a world which we shape, which we nurture within us...so that we can escape reality...
like ur circus world :P

Jadey said...

To be able to have a place that you can retreat to and capture a few smiles and remember things they way they once were isn't always a bad thing its when you get stuck there.

Jadey said...

To be able to have a place that you can retreat to and capture a few smiles and remember things they way they once were isn't always a bad thing its when you get stuck there.

Jadey said...

To be able to have a place that you can retreat to and capture a few smiles and remember things they way they once were isn't always a bad thing its when you get stuck there.

Stan Ski said...

As good as it gets, others may try to spoil it. Escape into your fantasies for solace.

Stan Ski said...

As good as it gets, others may try to spoil it. Escape into your fantasies for solace.

Stan Ski said...

As good as it gets, others may try to spoil it. Escape into your fantasies for solace.

keith hillman said...

A very interesting take, and an excellent read.

keith hillman said...

A very interesting take, and an excellent read.

keith hillman said...

A very interesting take, and an excellent read.

gautami tripathy said...

One good write. Keep writing!

faithfully fantasizing

gautami tripathy said...

One good write. Keep writing!

faithfully fantasizing

gautami tripathy said...

One good write. Keep writing!

faithfully fantasizing

Just Jen said...

i got confused at first then when you explained it was the dad from two years ago! awesome! stay in the fantasy, its a good place to be :D

Just Jen said...

i got confused at first then when you explained it was the dad from two years ago! awesome! stay in the fantasy, its a good place to be :D

Just Jen said...

i got confused at first then when you explained it was the dad from two years ago! awesome! stay in the fantasy, its a good place to be :D

Tejaswini Shenoy said...

Very touching... she is at peace...

Tejaswini Shenoy said...

Very touching... she is at peace...

Tejaswini Shenoy said...

Very touching... she is at peace...

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